Just gonna note a couple of spelling and grammar issues still there so you can fix before others see :3
-"Usualy" is spelled "usually"
-Also in the first sentence, you spell "of" as "off"
You should probably put a comma after "most of the day" in your first sentence for a breather.
-"because of playing different games" is a bit weird to say. You could instead say "because I play other games as well". Also, you could replace the period after with a comma and combine those two sentences.
-Put a comma after "Yes I did"
-Make sure you have a space between a comma and the word after!
- You do not need an "and" before you say "etc.", you could just say "...mob/player kills, etc."
-On the third question, after you say "Well I really want to help people on this server," you should say "and in order to do so" instead of simply "to do so" so that the sentence flows more smoothly.
-Also on the third question, replace "there" with "their" ("It's over there" as opposed to "It's their candy", "their" is used when referring to someone else's needs, possessions, ideas, things and so on).
-Third question: put "that" after "so"
Well I may have missed some, but those are the ones I've noticed so far :3 If I've made mistakes myself, feel free to correct me xD Good luck!